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Our Mission is “To create a peaceful society through the provision of quality education and food sovereignty”
(B) very precise and straight to the point. This mission statement can attract a great deal of investment to this organization.
Our mission is to enable small holder farmers access quality inputs so as to improve food security and better the lives of small holder rural farmers.
Sustainably reduce acute malnutrition for children under 5 years
I like your idea and I think it will attract a lot of potential funders but my suggestion is, your mission statement is too broad and it's better for you to add an outcome to your mission statement such as:
Help rural youth apply e-commerce and modern agricultural equipments.
BTW this is just a quick observation, I would like to express my apology if I don't use the correct words for the suggestions or hurt your feelings.
Thanks :)
Help struggling young entrepreneurs raise investment capital for profit.
( B) This mission statement is brief and concise and I believe that it can raise a huge amount of investment.
(B) Cool and straight forward. I think this mission statement will attract a good donation soon.
The mission is broad enough to attract many donors despite the competition.
our mission is to improve the lives of women and girls in disadvantaged positions through trainings so that they can live respectable and meaningful lives
mission is broad
our mission is to empower 400 women by 2024 by helping them start small businesses in order for them to be a valuable asset in the community
we are a non governmental organisation that is commited to empowering youth women and childred; promoting good health, human right and democracy
my mission is to improve the lives of disadvantaged women in kenya
Orsus Foundation seeks to strengthen the African women and young adults through education, technology, and health.
The world especially Africa needs more social entrepreneur that can solve the major environmental and health challenges.
Our mission is to ensure that individual experiencing severe and recurring mental health challenges have access to effective treatment regardless of income or insurance status. Additionally, MHI advocates for systemic changes that will increase access to, as well as promote education about effective treatment modalities for acute psychiatric illness.
I think that your mission statement needs to be more developed. It does not provide clarity of what your organization does, therefore you may not have as many donors.
@DanielKiprop said in Module 1 Discussion: Mission Statement:
our mission is to empower 400 women by 2024 by helping them start small businesses in order for them to be a valuable asset in the community
I think this mission statement is good and will attract many donors as it is specific and measurable.
Our Mission Statement will attract many donors because our aim is to provide funding for an orphanage,
the orphanage is already up and running, the houses (3) are build and 20 children are already taken care, we provide housing, food, cloth and education (which is for us the most important topic) that the children can and will go to school. The donation will help to fill the yearly budget to take up more then 50 children.
The fund raising will be attracting all kind of donors from family members, friends, colleagues.
This mission is fantastic and the goal will be a major change for the community.
Empowering women is the goal which will change the world.
IRDO has a mission of empowering disadvantaged communities in collaboration with CSOs and other stakeholders by diversifying their resource base and improving their quality of life through promotion of better livelihood systems
Our mission is: Disseminate and defend the rights of excluded people who suffer discrimination due to poverty, age, gender, color, language or culture.
Our mission is to help young people from the LGBT community who are experiencing depression or anxiety.
I think it is an incredible mission that would attract many donors; in my country, there is a technology fair for women and I think it is great because they give tools and talks for entrepreneurship, etc. Empowering women is something that should take more focus, you would have competition but I think that if you have everything organized you will have an incredible result and you will achieve your goal.
Me parece algo genial, creo que tendría muchos interesados aunque también mucha competencia, con una organización bien hecha podrían tener mas vista y así mas donadores o auspiciantes.
Our aim is producing appropriate and effective humanitarian solutions for the most challenging regions of the rapidly changing world
Our mission statement is: Save homeless people from hungry.
This statement is not very clear to me. I think that's too broad a statement and tends to find many competitors and few donors.
This statement is very clear and concise. I think they can find many donors and not much competitors.
Our Mission Statement is: To ensure a greater Lagos that accommodates the informal sector in urban planning for sustainable development.
It stems from our vision of ''Lagos as a ‘Sustainable SMART City of Choice''
Our Mission Statement is: To ensure a greater Lagos that accommodates the informal sector in urban planning for sustainable development.
It stems from our vision of ''Lagos as a ‘Sustainable SMART City of Choice''
@Yelisha said in Module 1 Discussion: Mission Statement:
Putting ingenious ideas to work so that people in poverty can change their world
@ Yelisha I think this mission statement will attract few donors simply because you cannot able to really define where the ingenious ideas are coming from. Are the ingenious ideas coming from people living in poverty?
@ThaoTran said in Module 1 Discussion: Mission Statement:
Indicate (a) whether you think it is likely to attract few or many donors and why and (b) whether you think they are likely to face a great deal of funding competition and why.
Similarly, I think the same for @ThaoTran. Your mission statement is not explicit enough. So it my pose a lot of challenges in attracting donors. It will narrow your donor pool.
We are a non-profit organization that focuses on addressing the social, political, and economic needs in a manner that strengthens communities, builds institutional capacity, and fosters local leadership.
Very interesting but one would still question "How". According to my understanding, the mission statement has to allow the donor to be intrigued, the donor has to see the need and has to be convinced that their money is going for a good cause before a proposal is sent out.
Creating an environment for peace an promoting gender equality
Welcoming those without them, home, to find community, education, and opportunity.
Our mission is to sustainably reduce hunger, provide and promote quality education as well as skills to less privileged.
Great mission
Great mission
@243386 said in Module 1 Discussion: Mission Statement:
Welcoming those without them, home, to find community, education, and opportunity.
very good mission statement
very good mission statmen
very good understandable
Our Mission is to proclaim the Gospel of Jesus Christ to all, especially orphans, Widows, Prisoners, Needies and persons with Disabilities through Capacity building, Food and Non-Food items.
Ensure that every adolescent or young people has a better health with no barriers
Mission Statement: ACOS Zambia provides access to quality education to vulnerable children who are out of school through technology and distance learning
Our mission is the regeneration of vulnerable communities through social rescue, rescue of the urban environment and financial improvement, thereby promoting social cohesion, recovering the value of homes and contributing to the reduction of social inequality.
My thinking is increasing the percentage of girls enrolled in schools and getting the off the streets, may decrease women literacy.
The mission statement describe the purposes and the direction the organization is taking achieving its desired target.
A good mission statement will as well spell out the organizations operation endeavors to potential donors
To create a safe space for people living with or personally affected by albinism where their psychological needs; autonomy, competence, and relatedness are met to champion self-development.
This is a great initiative, I think it will attract donor's attention,as HIV is almost a global hazard. However I think you should also look into diabetes as it proves to be a more dangerous chronic condition
IAE Mission it To continuously design, develop and deliver accessible quality life-long education programs through blended learning for sustainable social-economic development of Tanzania, Africa and the rest of the world.
too general and you didn't show ways to achieve it
To mobilize resources and funds to fund initiation of crafty skills that will empower unemployed single mother's and young girls from disadvantaged backgrounds so as to improve their livelihoods in future
It is an okay mission statement, not too specific though, however it has a wide range of competition because most organizations focus the goal of eradicating hunger.
I think it would have been much more attractive if it was specific and clear how you may intend to save the poor from hunger, for example do you intend to mobilize funds and other kind resources, or do you intend to give them a skill set thhea will make them be able to do projects to then be able to sustain themselves?
We build families for children in need, we help them shape their own futures and we share in the development of their communities.
This is a broad mission statement with the potential to attract many donors. At the same time there might be many competitions.
A broad mission statement, has a good potential to attract many donors at the same time many competitions.
Screen individuals aged 18 - 60 in the southwest region of cameroon for risks factors and presence of diabetes, cardiovascular diseases and parasitic infections to provide information for health and research.
I THINK THIS IS A GOOD MISSION STATEMENT BUT I ALSO THINK IT WILL HAVE A LOT OF COMPITIOTORS
Train the future leaders today
This contains more than one verb and the outcome appears vague
our mission is to see healthy and happier ethiopian people
To help children, families and individuals to grow as independent, healthy and productive citizens through quality counseling, out-of-home care and support services. We do this in partnership with those we serve as well as government agencies and other service providers.
I think this mission statement will attract a very specific donor base, could be broader and shorter to appeal to a larger audience
I don't think this mission statement explains what the problem is - just what you're doing.
Our Mission statement:
To Prevent Morbidity and Mortality Among Vulnerable communities
Or
Vulnerable Communities to have access to Health Services
It is a good statement, however, it would be better if you just shorten it to:
To empower women and children globally.
I trust empower itself is giving them the ability to use the hidden power/potentials and more.
I believe it would be better to say:
providing Health Services to Ethiopians people.
I suggest you shorten the statement and make it more attractive to the critical wording only
May be saying: Creating safe spaces for affected ................... people.
Providing hygiene packs to young schools girls in rural Nigeria
Providing hygiene packs to young schools girls in rural Nigeria
My mission is to improve access of young students to digital technology in schools
create an enabling environment where street-connected children can be empowered to attain an enhanced life and promising future by holistically focusing on their lifestyle, addressing their concerns and generating opportunities that are constructive to their overall well-being and self-sufficiency.
mission statement:
To enhance the quality of life for different spices in the Humboldt County rivers and streams.
To do economic empowerment and education with the surrounding community and out reaches for different programs
to educate on restorations to help restore the different habitats.
getting a better understanding why your asking for money and what purpose it will surve with your organization will help you better with your mission.
They look at at the long term goals for children and there needs and what will surve them best in the community by giving
them the recourses to help sustain a better way of living.
Better the lives of youth and women in Taita Taveta County through entrepreneurship and employability.
Better the lives of youth and women in Taita Taveta County through entrepreneurship and employability.
I think that my organization is building its Mission Statement.
we are small organization yet,but Im preparing about be better each day and deal the challengues.
I want to learn more in this course to grow more in fundraiser.
I want the same that you.
My mission is to create decent jobs for young persons , improve the general wellbeing of vulnerable persons(aged),create zero hunger and boost Economic gowth in Nigeria through soft skill acquisition and job empowerment programs, caregiving services and agrifood processing
This is a very inspiring mission but I know you'll have more organizations competing with you
Our organization seeks to help low-income people by providing training in audiovisual media.
We seek to improve the equipment of high-definition cameras, modern lighting equipment and a van to reach places far from the city with audiovisual teaching.
It seems to me an important mission for the region and even for the world. They have many possibilities for entrepreneurship both with the community and to obtain resources with private donors and large sponsors.
Small and Micro Enterprise Promotion Service (SMEPS) strives for diversification and development in the small and micro-enterprises sector in Yemen, and we hope to see small and micro-enterprises move into new subsectors and open production lines for markets and products.
Our mission is to bring real and lasting change to the children, youth and women living in poverty through holistic multidimensional programs in Education, economic development , advocacy and public health.
Our mission statement is: "Reaching the Throne via Worship".
It is religious not for profit organization. It's also interdenominational. It's primary function is worship in songs, psalms and hymns.
What's the specific action your organization is going to take in achieving that mission?
It's specific and you've shown the method you are using to achieve that mission.
Our mission is to provide relief For The murle war affected family in Gambella, Ethiopia.
It is good but somehow too complex that may expose you to more competition.
Providing knowledge to help NPOs become sustainable.
Fo the question that I selected no, We don,t have scheduled for monthly because there might be circumstances that may push the activity to the next coming month. For the second question regarding finance committee,we don,t have committee instead audit.
We seek to advocate for the physical, emotional, and spiritual needs of widows, orphans and less privileged children worldwide to grow up in a loving family and know the love of Jesus.
Addressing issues peculiar to West Africa
Likely to attract funding but also a high probability of encountering competition
Sounds interesting and looking forward to participating in this competition.
Creo que ciertos módulos son coherentes en el punto de recaudación de fondosa
We seek to protect North American species from extinction
This is too broad of a mission statement and thus other organizations with narrower mission statements will be more competitive. Who is the target of your relief? Children? Adults? Homeless people? Veterans?