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Our mission is to ignite the need to succeed in the hearts and minds of the underprivileged child through:
Improve resilience (to climate change) of the most vulnerable for better livelihoods.
NEYPAN promotes peace and good governance in the North Eastern Nigeria through education, advocacy and sensitization
Your mission statement is concise but in my own opinion, the verb, "address" seems to be inappropriate, you may consider other verbs
your mission statement has the potential to attract donors
your mission statement to too broad, before you read the last word you will forget the first phrase; it will be very difficult for your staff to remember; as such it will not attract donors
Mission Statement: To impact lives in Oyugis, Kenya with education opportunities and access to urgent medical care.
I thought it was concise and to the point. May have a lot of competition just because it's education. The "innovation" aspect I think would bring a lot of interested inquiries wanting to know what that innovation entails.
Good Mission Statement...short and to the point! Easy for people to remember and understand.
Our mission is to create awareness on cancer and support vulnerable women with the diesease.
great mission statement for MERRYCB
same for presidor
Making Health and Happiness accessible for children in Africa
Our mission statement is to ''Eradicate street begging in Nigeria"
Emmanuel Kundo, your mission statement is too long and it will have been better if it is less than eight words. However, it will not face funding competition.
Your mission statement does not capture your organization objectives and it will likely attract few donor.
This sounded more concise and structured to what I have been searching for.
How about saying
Making health facilities easily accessible to children in slum areas
How about saying
To reduce the risk of substance addictiin among individuals of the community
Our Mission: Enhancement of Accelerated local industrialisation in Zambia through strategic economic opportunities capacitation of Zambians technically, and financially.
Your Mission is sounding more like a vision statement. your mission statement must specify the objectives to achieve your mission
How do you intend to achieve this? That is what mission statement is all about
Our mission is "Contribute to the consumers nutritional stability through the production and selling of tasty, heathy and affordable chickens to ensure the life quality"
I liked your mission, it is clear and any one being employee or donor can easily understand. But, I believe that in our mission we should respond why do we exist through four main questions such as: " WHAT ARE WE DOING, WHAT IS THE FINAL PRODUCT (AND HOW SHOULD IT LOOKS LIKE), HOW ARE WE DOING AND WHAT ARE THE MAIN REASONS. However, it can obviously attract some donors and improving some aspects you can deal of funding competition because of the focus of it. Sucess
Hello Emanuel, you have a good mission, it sounds interesting and I appreciate. If you pay attention I believe that you can figure out that it sounds as goals of your organization. In my humble opinion the mission show to people in easily way the "WHY" we exist and how we develop our work, the end of it, the main mechanisms we use. So, I believe that improving some of these aspects I mentioned you can attract donors and you will be able to deal of funding competition because you are showing exactly the "WHY" what I think donor search for. Success Dear
To promote a society where children develop to their full potentials.
Our Mission: Bettering Children Protection Services by Networking and Coming together.
Hogares Teresa Toda improves the lives of vulnerable Puerto Rican girls through education, spiritual and health services.
I understand your mission is important, is short but I recommend specified where in Africa.
@Ayomide_Daniel said in Module 1 Discussion: Mission Statement:
How about saying
To reduce the risk of substance addictiin among individuals of the community
Specified which community.
Projectlive Africa mission is to create the largest crowdfunding community in Nigeria and throughout Africa through it's fundraising platform.
To promote access and utilization of quality agro-technologies, agricultural health and safety, and business development services.
Empowering OVC and the Youth out of social marginalization, isolation and discrimination through income generating initiatives and formal education with basic technical/vocational skills
Sounds great and specific
How? Which specific parts of Africa?
My Organization Mission is to " strive to provide relief services and promote sustainable development to vulnerable communities through capacity enhancement interventions “
Hi Davido , I Have been Impressed with your Organization mission It is broad and can accommodate many Funders due to the fact that Industrialization can either be in agriculture, Mining, Environment sectors and so many other which in Africa employ a great number of people.Ofcouse the competiton from other organization will be much greater.
Hi Davido , I Have been Impressed with your Organization mission ,It is broad and can accommodate many Funders due to the fact that Industrialization can either be in agriculture, Mining, Environment sectors and so many other which in Africa employ a great number of people.Ofcouse, the competiton from other organization will be much greater.
Your mission is very specific and targeted ,however it is narrow and thus can attract less funders
To serve customers organic and nourishing meals and beverages.
This is an incomplete and confusing mission statement.
It defines the verb- "Strive to provide";
It specifies the target beneficiaries-"vulnerable communities";
But fails to mention the outcome of the action taken.
Too lengthy and confusing!
A proper mission statement presentation should had being:
"To empower OCV youths with vocational skills training, to lead them to a life of self sustainance through personal income generation."
Too lengthy and confusing!
A proper mission statement presentation should had being:
"To empower OCV youths with vocational skills training, to lead them to a life of self sustainance through personal income generation."
How would people in poverty change their world?
Your mission statement is ambiguous and incomplete: it states an action to be taken; it defines the target; but does not clearly define the desired outcome.
Funders will not be attracted to such a mission statement, because, it is lacking in outcome and most likely to fail.
"To provide vulnerable communities relief services and sustainable economic development", ought to have being a more focused, well organized, and easily understood way of writing your mission statement.
My mission is to provide assistance to the women who are victims of Domestic Violence.
Homicide Survivors, Inc. is a nonprofit victim assistance organization dedicated to meeting the crisis and long-term needs of families of murder victims.
How are you doing this?
This is very broad
I would remain specific instead of using the word "them" state children
Eradicate tertiary education inequality as well as to increase tertiary enrollment rate in through innovation in INDIA.
Our mission: To establish and build quality and affordable world class project and business management training and consultancy Centre in Uganda.
This mission is generic, you need to mention those you help and you seem to be experts in every field and sector. your mission may not get you the support you need.
@nikhilkrasn40 said in Module 1 Discussion: Mission Statement:
My mission is to provide assistance to the women who are victims of Domestic Violence.
It would be good to state the kind off assistance you provide. Being specific removes the ambiguity in the mission and attracts attention of prospective donors.
Facilitate the building and ownership of affordable houses to African families
Transforming lives, providing access to university education
Very good mission statement, but I think it is too broad. Will attract competition
Very broad. Definitely, attract competition
Our mission statement is to ensure access to quality health services for all.
It is bit confusing mission; to eradicate poverty by providing food parcels is not enough. May be you can rethink about your mission statement. This mission might attract the donor who works to eradicate poverty but they have to face high compitition.
Mission Statement: Ensuring access to the quality health services among hard to reach communities.
It looks nice and specific but I thought less convincing by statement "whom we are in contact". I think it attract less donor but they will face more compitition because many organizations are working in this sector.
I think this mission statement is likely to attract many donors as the mission is broad. As the mission is broad, it is likely to face a great deal of funding competition.
This mission statement is likely to attract few donors as it targets the particular population. But, I think it is likely to face great deal of funding competition because there are many organizations working on this sector.
To give food support to poor families especially widows and children
To empower younger widows to set up small scale business so as to be self sufficient
Yes it will attract many donors because funders take interest in health causes it is a global issue . but it will will face competiton because so many organization are out there running health for all initiatives.
There was no target audience in the mission statement it broad.
This mission will attract many donors because education i s an interest area for development of a community.
Not likely to face competion because target audience in the education sector was specified terticiary and the specific change inequality
We support initiatives that foster holistic empathy for humans, animals and the environment.
Re: Mission Statement: To impact lives in Oyugis, Kenya with education opportunities and access to urgent medical care.
Great mission. It is very clear, concise and specific. While it may be likely not to attract too many donors, there is likely not to be too much competition, which is positive. I would suggest using the word "improve" vs. "impact".
Re: Mission Statement: Ensuring access to the quality health services among hard to reach communities.
The mission is broad and ambitious. It is likely to attract donors, but also competition. I would suggest being more specific such as stating a geographic area and replace "hard to reach" with "isolated" or "at risk".
Our mission is to provide a safe and comfortable environment for disadvantaged children.
The mission statement is a little agresive when you say - eliminate ignorance. Always reach out from a positive approach
Mission Statement:
By installing hydroponic gardens at homes, we benefit families in vulnerable situations on a social, health, environment and economic level across urban areas in Mexico.
Where??? it's important to add a location
To promote eye health among vulnerable groups
compelling,short and specific!!
concise !!
we are yet to find a mission but I'm grateful for the ideas impeached from all of your missions!!!
discussing is the key of the sucess
Every successful salesperson in the world will tell you that if you do not ask for a sale, you will not get it. In your video be sure to ask for a donation and for help spreading the crowdfunding project to the viewer’s friends and social-media network. "The ask" should be clear, carefully worded and create a sense of urgency and action. Tell people specifically what to do and don't leave it up to them to figure it out on their own. But make sure it is sincere, as this authentic message can turn a viewer into a donor and marketing machine.
Empower at-risk youth through holistic services and supportive life skills training.
Houyee: "Our mission is to provide a safe and comfortable environment for disadvantaged children."
This is clear and short and readable. I do think you may want to change some of the words as "provide" "disadvantaged" and "children" are all pretty common words for charities. I do think your mission statement is easy to understand and from it I gather that maybe you run a shelter to other housing program for kids. If so, great job!
Kristen C: "We support initiatives that foster holistic empathy for humans, animals and the environment."
This is a short readable mission statement but not super clear. It sounds to me like you provide funding or education or volunteers and I want to know more (which definitely catches my interest which is the point of a mission statement, so good job on that.) If you want to attract more donors and have a clearer, more specific message, you might want to focus on the support you give as opposed to the kinds of organizations you support. That might give people a better understanding of exactly what you do, and then when they look into it more they will see what organizations you support. I'm also unclear about the organizations your support because it says they "foster holistic empathy" and while those are great and not commonly used words, I don't really know what you're trying to say. So all around focusing on the support you give as opposed to the organizations might be better given the brevity or length you're going for in your mission statement. Besides having a lot of competition though, I do believe this mission statement (once clarified,) and your organization in general will also attract a lot of donors as there are many people who want to support smaller organizations and grass roots efforts but do not have the time to volunteer or get involved. Great job!
Promote education to give more chances to people in the community.
We will acknowledge God's caring hand in our lives and stretch out our hands to all people to lead them to know and touch the Living Christ.
This is a great idea and makes it really easy for people to donate.
Well not a bad idea but I think that this will not attract as much donors because it is a popular idea. What makes it different and outstanding for a donor to fund it. The uniqueness of it has to come out so that donors will be moved at its mention.
Our mission statement is to create a community of elderly people and give them an opportunity to live fulfilled lives. We will do this by delivering services personalized to individual needs and integrated with local communities. Our values are well being promotion, excellence, respect to people and safety to all the elderly people.
This is a good mission statement and I think it will be funded by a number of donors.
To advance the gospel of Jesus and his kingdom into the nations through spiritual generations of laborers living and discipling among the lost
It's a great one
To advance the gospel of Jesus and his kingdom into the nations through spiritual generations of laborers living and discipling among the lost
Cooffe - People - Potential
Mision statement is to inspire healthier communities by connecting people to real food.
Improve the collaboration between leaders, professionals and companies with sustainable development by increasing conscious and responsible business behavior
Improve the link and collaboration between leaders, professionals and companies with sustainable development by increasing conscious and responsible business behavior
The mission statement of YKIP is :
improving the lives of marginalized communities in Bali by breaking the cycle of poverty through comprehensive educational opportunities.
I think this mission of statement is vague. If you could put a specific subject of your program and in which field you are working in empowering the indigenous people will attract more people to support you
It is simple and quite unique, but I think it left a confusion in the reader's mind. What will happent to the people, potential, and coffee? What is the connection and how this three word make a better thing to the any of them. I think if you could make it elaborate by explaining more activities or goals, it would be nice.
To serve less privileged community such as children with special needs & those in need of care & protection with the aim to make them achieve rightful place in their settings with the active participation of all stake holders.
Need to be bit more specific. Like safe in terms of buliding understanding among people for the disadvanted people or creating opportunities for the disadvantaged people.